She bleeds indigo
islands
ebony smudge
saffron secrets
petaled
puddled
edges of cotton
thought
…………………..all
……………………for
…………………………..naught.
.
Prompt and visual over at The Mag.
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Beautiful!
Sad ending, De; but realistic.
beautiful
all for naught…ugh…now that is a hard ending…
Gorgeous sound, coloring, and spicy scent:
“indigo
islands
ebony smudge
saffron secrets”
I do believe everyone is misreading your ending. It is not “all for naught.” Quite the opposite, it is “thought all for naught.”
This pained,
—-bleeding,
——–sleeping
————beauty
————————————–is about to
—————————————————————————rise.
And surprise
all who thought
it was all for naught.
gorgeous imagery
where are the koi
I love, love it all but this portion…
“saffron secrets
petaled
puddled
edges of cotton”
I really LOVE that!! So happy to be reading, “de!!”
Lovely!
True; in the prompt Ophelia bleeds indigo islands. Striking.
INCREDIBLE! Beautiful. Excellent!
Incredibly lovely ………..
Wonderful words.
Anna
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beauty formed of painted words.