………You and I
…..have seven more days
………….to ponder and play. Spill
………soft into my broken places,
…………..fill my heart with grace-
………..steeped spaces, whispered
…………………breeze, and please –
…………….flow slow, July, this
……………………………..Lake and I
……………………………………………have unfinished business.
…
This is amazing. Every word, every bit of white space. Perfect.
“Spill
soft into my broken places”
“flow slow, July, this
Lake and I
have unfinished business”
ahhh – promises of future things – loved this!
Beautiful. I don’t think business can ever be finished with the lake…there is always another day, another year.
Sounds like you have a wonderful vacation to bring the beauty of life into your every breath.
This lake and I have unfinished business. Love it.
I love the photo, fits the poem perfectly and that last line is absolutely fantastic–reminds me of Robert Frost
Love it!
Yes!!! I like the tone…very empowered!!! Loves….