Scribbling Stones – Day 14

Posted on January 14, 2013 by

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cotton candy swirling sky
fades to ebony spill.
one pup barks in protest.

 

 

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3 Responses to Scribbling Stones – Day 14

  1. rashmenon says:
    January 14, 2013 at 8:51 pm

    is it raining there? :) ah, ebony spill makes me think of mud-tinged rain-drops.

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  2. Sharp Little Pencil says:
    January 14, 2013 at 9:06 pm

    Just saw a movie about Hiroshima called “Black Rain.” The inky radioactive rain is what came to mind, although I know this is not your intent!! While I confess I don’t quite understand the brevity of these poems, I am intrigued and have read them all, so I’ll comment here. Liked this one best! Love, Amy
    http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/01/13/the-journey-trifecta/

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  3. Jane says:
    January 16, 2013 at 2:10 pm

    “cotton candy … fades to ebony spill” It always does, no matter how hard you try to fight it. Day to night, light to dark, sweet to burn, skin to ash. Like overcooked marshmallows, we pass right through the stages of gooey goodness to inedible, deathly pain.

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