Scribbling Stones – Day 28

Posted on January 28, 2013 by

….

she’s a golden pool
and I’m a fool for her
full, fat glow
all shimmer and slow
-dance with
stars.

she’s a friend of mine
and a sacred sig(h)n
and something slightly
divine: a rock
bathed in Son
-shine.

….

…

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6 Responses to Scribbling Stones – Day 28

  1. Jen Reyneri says:
    January 28, 2013 at 8:32 pm

    Makes me want to bask in the starlight tonight instead of being up writing :)

    Reply
  2. Susan says:
    January 29, 2013 at 6:02 am

    Love! The rocks, real and symbolic, sun golden and divine!

    Reply
    • Strawberry Sunshine Sighs Seven Solemn Sayings, So As Not to Speak So Selfly says:
      January 29, 2013 at 8:22 am

      This comment is a little poem. Excellent sound.

      Reply
  4. Strawberry Sunshine Sighs Seven Solemn Sayings, So As Not to Speak So Selfly says:
    January 29, 2013 at 8:22 am

    Gorgeous. You do love that moon, don’t you? I never even see her. I don’t go outside enough at night.

    “all shimmer and slow
    -dance with
    stars” Love “slow-dance.”

    “sig(h)n” Brilliant.

    In the second half, I thought you were going to say “slightly / off / kilter.” But your sweet spiritual ending sounds more hopeful, as if she will have a happy ending. That is the magic of poetry versus the real world. But that capped “Son” does tend to trump everything else, doesn’t it?

    Reply
  5. Hannah Gosselin says:
    January 29, 2013 at 4:14 pm

    Yes!!! I love these, De!! SO good, you’re so good at shining that light! ♥

    Reply

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