…..
We figure in threes.
Thus, this:
Go again
-st, art,
wish our hearts
might prove
straight enough
to shine, sparks
of interest sprinkled
between
the lines.
………..(Sweet.)
Brilliance
or bust.
…..
…..
We figure in threes.
Thus, this:
Go again
-st, art,
wish our hearts
might prove
straight enough
to shine, sparks
of interest sprinkled
between
the lines.
………..(Sweet.)
Brilliance
or bust.
…..
In my case… bust
Awwww. Sorry, Stan. Hope you had better luck later in the day.
Clever and tightly written. No wastage in this one!!
Thanks so much, Misky.
Loving the short sharp whirls De.
Thank you, Veronica.
Love the first two lines and what you did with against/start/art. … “straight enough” … whatever that is.
Thank ya, ma’am. Right out of the chute I knew that first phrase wanted to be schizophrenic: “Go again, start.” “Go against art.” “Go again, street, art.” “Go again, saint (thou) art…”
I pick, oh I don’t know…brilliance! You are shining again, my friend
Awww, thanks Sara.
This one made me smile…brilliance or bust indeed! That’s the goal, anyway
Thank you, Anne Katherine. I have a lot more bust in poetry world than I do in real life. Ha.
Glad to see you saved a lot of words for the rest of us to use, Madam PL.
Always a pleasure De.