This Miserable Fuss

…..

We figure in threes.
Thus, this:

Go again
-st, art,
wish our hearts
might prove
straight enough
to shine, sparks
of interest sprinkled
between
the lines.

………..(Sweet.)

Brilliance
or bust.

 

…..

 

 

 

Wordled.

 

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13 Responses to This Miserable Fuss

  1. Stan Ski says:

    In my case… bust :(

  2. Misky says:

    Clever and tightly written. No wastage in this one!!

  3. Loving the short sharp whirls De. :)

  4. indigo slow rider says:

    Love the first two lines and what you did with against/start/art. … “straight enough” … whatever that is.

    • whimsygizmo says:

      Thank ya, ma’am. Right out of the chute I knew that first phrase wanted to be schizophrenic: “Go again, start.” “Go against art.” “Go again, street, art.” “Go again, saint (thou) art…”

  5. Sarav says:

    I pick, oh I don’t know…brilliance! You are shining again, my friend :-)

  6. This one made me smile…brilliance or bust indeed! That’s the goal, anyway :)

  7. Glad to see you saved a lot of words for the rest of us to use, Madam PL. ;) Always a pleasure De.

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