Struck


(an Ovillejo)

 


I laud the stars above
and love
to wish upon them, too.
Won’t you
come bid the hands of time
be mine?
Beneath this salted sky,
it’s simpler than it seems;
Every girl’s got her dreams.
And, Love: won’t you be mine?
 

….
Co-prompted by, and shared at:
Poetic Bloomings
and
Poetic Asides

 

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6 Responses to Struck

  1. Misky says:

    Oh, De, that is beautiful. After reading that, I feel a bit star struck, too. ~ Misky

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    whimsygizmo posted: ” (an Ovillejo)

    … I laud the stars above and love to wish upon them, too. Won’t you come bid the hands of time be mine? Beneath this salted sky, it’s simpler than it seems; Every girl’s got her dreams. And, Love: won’t you be m”

  2. This looks so simple, but it sounded so complicated when I saw what an Ovillejo is. Well done.
    Can you explain to me how you acheive the links. Do you simply place the URL on the text?

    • whimsygizmo says:

      Sheryl, in WordPress there’s a little button that looks like a “link” of sorts. When I highlight the word I want to link up, I can then type (or cut and paste) the link in when prompted to do so. It’s in the “draft” phase of doing the post. I only know how to do it on WordPress, and don’t even know how to do it here in the comments (I’ve tried.) ;)

  3. jasmine says:

    Super sweet. :)

  4. I’m always impressed with anyone who can pull off a form. It’s always best when you don’t even realize the form exists, and that’s what you’ve done here!

  5. Sara v says:

    Me too, I’m no good at forms–you did a beautiful job and I love that beginning line “I laud the stars above, and love…” sigh…nicely done my friend :-)

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