….
Laugh.
Cry.
Dream.
Create and kill.
Plan.
Reap.
Weep at will.
There’s time for loss
and time to be found.
Embrace my heart and
then turn, turn
…………..around
and watch me cast
this last.
…..
Written for Margo Roby’s Tuesday Tryouts.
….
Laugh.
Cry.
Dream.
Create and kill.
Plan.
Reap.
Weep at will.
There’s time for loss
and time to be found.
Embrace my heart and
then turn, turn
…………..around
and watch me cast
this last.
…..
Written for Margo Roby’s Tuesday Tryouts.
xoxo
This reminds me of Ecclesiastes at its core, but your form is so interesting, your choice of words, spare. I loved this, De. Love to the family, Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/03/11/goosebumps/
I love the rhythm in this poem, De. Really excellent.
I love the insistence of this!
You make us look at/ examine each one separately, sometimes in interesting pairs… like stones picked – great title for what follows
Trimmed to its barest elements, the truth stands out.
I’m with Mama Zen. She picked a great word to describe the speaker’s attitude. I always love your structure and the way you play with sound. You have a tuned and tuneful ear. Love the surprise at the end.
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