Flowers That Will Not Wait For Snow

….

We stretch,
sketch the sky gray
employ the wind
and screen our snow
-berry branches
from the silent roar
of the vast
meadow.

The story of the grasses
leaves us stout-stemmed
and twisted,
a strong
bent contrivance.

There is sight
-seeing in a daisy, where
….we
are a cluster of in
……-digo ivy adaptations
stealing the sun
and shun
………..-ning shade.

March roars in,
terrible and tawny.

We zigzag, swallow
shallow thorns.

…….

Written for a fun botanical word/phrase list over at Toads. Come play!


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13 Responses to Flowers That Will Not Wait For Snow

  1. ellaedge says:

    Well done…I love your poem and the ending well reminds me of the lion’s teeth ;D
    I want to steal the sun!

  2. Mama Zen says:

    “March roars in,
    terrible and tawny.”

    I love that. This is a beautiful piece!

  3. Margaret says:

    “Sketch the sky grey.” Loved that. Oh, the impatience of spring!

  4. Wow! you made excellent use of both words and phrases. I especially loved this section:
    we
    are a cluster of in
    -digo ivy adaptations
    stealing the sun
    and shun
    -ning shade.

    Many thanks for your contribution to our Real Toads prompt. These words have inspired many amazing poems.

  5. Marian says:

    March really can be terrible and tawny :)

  6. whimsygizmo says:

    Thank you so much, Ladies. I have LOVED everyone’s contributions to this list prompt.

  7. Grace says:

    Love the word& line breaks ~ Thanks so much for the challenging words De ~

    Cheers ~

  8. What a wonderful piece you created from the word list. Each line is a jewel. Thank you so much for the challenge.

  9. carly says:

    so, essentially, some people are determined to grow, petal, and poem into sensational being, even before the snow melts, even if it seems it is not their time; they will shine, defying shade and sinister forces trying to bury them beneath white coal, winter, and ice

  10. “We zigzag, swallow
    shallow thorns.” What a way to end the poem!

  11. Sara v says:

    Love that “sight-seeing in a daisy!!” I really wanted to play, too much going on–life really gets in the way of poetry sometimes–that was a great list!! :-)

  12. March roars in.- certainly has done here and its not great

  13. whimsygizmo says:

    Thank you all for the kind comments. :)

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