Murmur

Posted on February 6, 2012 by whimsygizmo 
 
Oh, dubious rebellion
petulant
                           staccato
heart,
shed this metallic scar
latch these ruins
to magic dart
fuses set;
billows hungry for new
breath.
Exile hate,
inhale hope.

 

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6 Responses to Murmur

  2. Buddah Moskowitz says:
    February 6, 2012 at 2:43 pm

    I like this prolific period you’re sharing. Thanks – el Mosk

    Reply
  3. markwindham says:
    February 6, 2012 at 6:43 pm

    🙂 , we both had a ‘staccato heart’. Good stuff, I am always drawn to your economy of words.

    Reply
  4. pmwanken says:
    February 6, 2012 at 6:43 pm

    There ya go again…absolutely shining in your ability to use so few words to say so much.

    you amaze me

    Reply
  5. Magical Mystical Teacher says:
    February 8, 2012 at 5:56 pm

    My gosh, you crammed a lot into a few lines and even fewer words!

    Whirling Haiku and Senryu

    Reply
  6. Annette says:
    February 9, 2012 at 10:19 pm

    Very tight — great use of the words. This works very well.

    Reply

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