Don’t noD (Do geese see God?)

(a mirror poem)

Look,
Am I here
in this glass?
To be, I must
dim how I see.
Oh,
I see. How dim
must I be to
glass this in?
Here I am.
Look.

 

 

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8 Responses to Don’t noD (Do geese see God?)

  1. whimsygizmo says:

    Also known as a palindrome poem. This one was written for Sunday Scribblings “Reflect” prompt:
    http://sundayscribblings.blogspot.co.uk/

  2. Shawna says:

    Fantastic. Seriously impressive. I’ve never written one of these.

    Love these:
    “To be, I must dim how I see.”
    “How dim must I be to glass this in?”

  3. Simply brilliant. Loved it.

  4. oldegg says:

    This will set everyone thinking “Can I do that?” Very impressive indeed.

  5. Whoa! You are REALLY kicking off this challenge in high gear! Yo GO, De!

  6. KC says:

    Very, very nice. That twisted my brain up and squeezed a thought out…which I will use to birth a brain-twister of my own. *hugs* You inspire me.

    KC

  7. whimsygizmo says:

    Thank you all, so much.

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