Montage



She laces jasmine
around the necks
of her demons; window
open just a scrap,
ample escape space
for some flawed granite idol
trapped between a whistle
moon and its sunset domain.

 

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Written for The Sunday Whirl Wordle.

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6 Responses to Montage

  1. markwindham says:

    She’s Baaack! and thats a good thing. ;-)

    Love the opening, calm them with jasmine.

  2. rosemary mint says:

    “She laces jasmine
    around the necks
    of her demons”

    Hellooooo? That is amazing. What a tactic.

    “trapped between a whistle
    moon and its sunset”

    I love this gloriosity, and I am particularly fond of people living on the moon releasing an extended community-whistle while watching the sun “go down.”

  3. Mary says:

    “laced between its whistle moon and its sunset domain” — I love this!

  4. Sarav says:

    Was going to pick a favorite line and realized that I love them all :-) Beautiful!

  5. rashmenon says:

    like it, very much.

  6. JulesPaige says:

    The magic of your brevity…spellbinding!
    My shorter piece ‘Crust’ is here (with a link to the continuing story on the bottom):
    http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/06/sunday-whirl-62-crust-2.html

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