Hidden Beach

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This sky Lake
leads the way
through rippled dawn
and we find it again
for the first time
tucked soft
in silken sand
and gentle wave
not a soul in sight
except for mine
waiting
right where I left her.

 

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4 Responses to Hidden Beach

  1. I really like this:
    “and we find it again
    for the first time
    tucked soft
    in silken sand”

    Ooh, is this also a reference to your mermaid-muse?!
    “not a soul in sight
    except for mine
    waiting
    right where I left her”

    I woke up with these words kicking around in my head and thought they were meant for you to play with: meridian, antemeridian, antediluvian, Sumerian, Cimmerian

    Weird, huh?

  2. “leads the way
    through rippled dawn
    and we find it again
    for the first time
    tucked soft
    in silken sand”

    This and oh my goodness…your ending…such a lovely surprise to find her there!!! Love this and you!!

  3. Sarav says:

    ooooo! goosey-bumps!! What an unbelievably perfect ending–Love it!!

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