Beyond Bottles

Posted on November 21, 2013 by whimsygizmo

….

 
Open it to ocean,
etch it in the sand.
Whisper to the pillow,
trace it on your hand.

Spill it into starlight,
breathe it on the breeze.
Put this horizon on hold,
and leave a message for me.

 

….
Written for Poetic Asides, Day 21.

 

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5 Responses to Beyond Bottles

  1. Lindy Lee says:
    November 22, 2013 at 6:22 am

    Happy Holidays 2013 to Whimsygizmo from Halloween to New Year 2014. To let you know I always read but must fly through WordPress, as always pressed for time…

    Reply
  2. Hannah Gosselin says:
    November 22, 2013 at 7:42 pm

    Your first two lines…*sigh* that’s just where I want to be.

    Where’s our poetry shack gonna be…on the shore of course but the sea will stay seaward and the shack will stay shore bound and there will be lots pf space in between to scratch our secrets. 🙂

    Reply
  3. Sara v says:
    December 18, 2013 at 1:09 pm

    De, so beautiful!! Some of your poems I mark to read later so I have time to breathe them in and love them–really love this 🙂

    Reply

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