From the Library of Congress
: World War I
poster from a lithograph
, A YMCA Cellar in Flanders.
..
Dear John,
You are the Dead.
I am the Living, though my heart denies it.
You left me
…………(bravely)
alone in a field of poppies.
I leave you
these words from failing hands
that mark our place,
between the musty pages
of our favorite book.
They’re yours to keep.
I shall not sleep.
Forever,
Elizabeth
..
Written for Quickly, Day 2.
Reference poem: “In Flanders Fields,” by John McCrae
I love the portions that you brought of the original…especially the poppies…well done, De!
Wow.. very nicely done.
Packed with emotions in its’ brevity.
Nicely done. Time for tissues!
I like what you did and how you responded to the poem. Very creative. “I am the living” – though it’s not really living if you can’t sleep!
And the title is great, as well.
Oh, very neatly done.
So very nice, thank you!
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Thank you, all.