.
This thing didn’t sing,
………………………..smit with first nicks,
big critics,
wild origin – high
……………..winds, which will
it still,
………………..still sting.
Think spring.
……….If
inspiring, I bid
……………………..him this:
Still,
……………..this night,
I will
……kiss
……………..him
right.
..
.
Following Margo over to Oulipost for today’s challenge, a Univocalism (using only one vowel), with only words that can be found in this source article from the LV Sun.
Excellent! This is so much fun.
Woww and wow…challenge and content…so passionate. 🙂
I was imagining chapped lips – trying to be repaired before the evening!
I thought Romeo and Juliet 🙂 The rhythm is Shakespearean. Fun.