(a Triolet)
.
There’s a murmur in her heart,
but they can’t find it –
the tissue is too scarred.
There’s a murmur in her heart
and once it’s torn apart,
they’ll try to bind it.
There’s a murmur in her heart,
but they can’t find it.
…
(a Triolet)
.
There’s a murmur in her heart,
but they can’t find it –
the tissue is too scarred.
There’s a murmur in her heart
and once it’s torn apart,
they’ll try to bind it.
There’s a murmur in her heart,
but they can’t find it.
…
Triolet. I like that; thanks for sharing that musical form with us!
Tears here. Though murmurs are not usually fatal, I responded to the torn.
I have one of these. And they don’t always hear it.
I like the repetition, and the idea of the murmur just being a metaphor for love.
Beautiful and sad. Definitely magical like all your work!
Wonderful use of the triolet.