Lake Sighed

Posted on July 22, 2014 by whimsygizmo

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What shall we lace
or trace
or erase
into tumbled sand?

What will we keep
burn deep
spill, steep
with trembled hands?

One desire shines on,
deep indigo true:
That I would always
know You
in all this
…………..blue.
 

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4 Responses to Lake Sighed

  1. Kir Piccini says:
    July 22, 2014 at 9:09 am

    This was more than lovely, it was beautiful, serene and polished.
    *sigh*

    Reply
  2. Shawna says:
    July 22, 2014 at 11:20 am

    Oh my, that title. Perfect reworking of “lakeside.” (swoon)

    The last five lines gave me chills. SO spot on. Love this piece and message.

    Reply
  3. anne katherine says:
    July 22, 2014 at 5:11 pm

    This is a great beach poem, and the sentiment at the end the “You” — the creator of it all — very well done!

    Reply
  4. anne katherine says:
    July 22, 2014 at 5:11 pm

    p.s. also love the title 🙂

    Reply

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