Lake Sighed

What shall we lace
or trace
or erase
into tumbled sand?

What will we keep
burn deep
spill, steep
with trembled hands?

One desire shines on,
deep indigo true:
That I would always
know You
in all this

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4 Responses to Lake Sighed

  1. Kir Piccini says:

    This was more than lovely, it was beautiful, serene and polished.

  2. Shawna says:

    Oh my, that title. Perfect reworking of “lakeside.” (swoon)

    The last five lines gave me chills. SO spot on. Love this piece and message.

  3. This is a great beach poem, and the sentiment at the end the “You” — the creator of it all — very well done!

  4. p.s. also love the title 🙂

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