the trick, stirred


finding what we did
……….n’t lose


brer rabbit
…….(liar, liar)
hasn’t got
a briar patch
to speak of.

it’s a stick
-y sit
-ation, shaken.

sometimes, the whole
is made
of tar,


Prompted by Quickly in September, day 12


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6 Responses to the trick, stirred

  1. whimsygizmo says:

    Today we were asked to take a previously written poem, and add a trickster.
    My original is here:

  2. Misky says:

    The breaks in this had me chuckling.


  3. Shawna says:

    I knew I remembered this poem, sort of.

    “sometimes, the whole world is made of tar, baby” … Indeed it is. I love the way you embedded “trickster” in the title. It jumped right out at me in my feed.

  4. I spit up my Snapple on the last line. A great knee slap De. Thank you!

  5. “sit you -ation” 🙂 Another name for a time-out! Love it.
    You definitely added a trickster, with the title and the brer rabbit!
    And the ending is awesome!

  6. julespaige says:

    🙂 Big grin, time for gin (maybe even without the ‘tar-nic’.

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