on the rocks

Posted on September 15, 2014 by whimsygizmo

…

been up all night drinking
lemonade, trying to make some
-thing of all of this. you bring
the ice, and I’ll find the shade;
this breeze’ll float the rest
………….away, and
tomorrow’s another
…………………….day.

 

 

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2 Responses to on the rocks

  1. Shawna says:
    September 15, 2014 at 3:29 pm

    Thank goodness. This one has been lame. Yesterday too. Clever first line break. But ouch on the tummy ache that will follow all that acid!

    Reply
  2. anne katherine says:
    September 15, 2014 at 6:50 pm

    Great to make lemonade – but sometimes tomorrow’s the best thing to look forward to.

    Reply

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