None, Yet.

Posted on September 24, 2014 by whimsygizmo

(a nonet)

…

Can you feel our syllables fading,
a fall-fraying between the lines?
If time ticks us off so far,
can you imagine what
kind of star will stay,
shine-say what to
do when two
be, come
one.

..
Prompted by Poetic Bloomings.

 


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3 Responses to None, Yet.

  1. Shawna says:
    September 24, 2014 at 2:05 pm

    This is really cool. I’m not familiar with this form, but I dig the title and opening, especially.

    Reply
  2. anne katherine says:
    September 24, 2014 at 4:48 pm

    Or one, yet! Very neat the way you go from 8 to 1! “fall-fraying” – great phrase!

    Reply
  3. Sara v says:
    September 25, 2014 at 5:19 am

    Time ticks us off….really love that 🙂

    Reply

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