My, This.



It’s just too
much,
when every
thing you touch
………..(know, new, old)
turns
to
……..ashes
….stone
……………..dust

cold

………………hard metal.

 

 

..
Prompted by Quickly in September, day 25.

 

 

 

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9 Responses to My, This.

  1. Well, it’s good if you’re a heavy metal rocker!
    I like the “know, new, old” – and the first line “it’s just too” — some days are really like that – just too too! And everything turns into something you weren’t expecting. I like your title, too – comma is well placed. I do expect a heavy metal tune from you next 🙂

  2. julespaige says:

    Ah, King Midas I presume.
    It was you my dear that helped inspire my sober retelling of the Emperor!
    Thank you!

  3. Imagine…that would be horrible if true and if metaphorical…still tough stuff. Love this.

  4. Shawna says:

    My this is just too much too.

    New expression: “There’s no new old.” We keep doing it though, don’t we? Repeating history, I mean. We try so hard to change ourselves, become a new version of our old selves, but we wind up right back there in the middle of our this anyway.

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