Last Exchange


In her deranged haze,
she’s taken the S
-train too seriously
and much too often,
sustained herself in
feigned tracks and traipsed

Enflame her, chant
her name, fill it
with syllables
not her own. You’ll see
she’s grown.

She’s vacated the bat
cave, but she’s counting on
her es



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6 Responses to Last Exchange

  1. Shawna says:

    I love what you did with S cape; very clever.

  2. She does need to get out of that bat cave- too confining and not enough room for her to stretch her own wings – or have her own real cape!! I like the word “enflame.”

  3. Shawna says:

    Enflame her chant; fill her name. She’s counting on cave.
    Love these.
    Still having a tough time commenting. 😦

  4. I love that last stanza! Very clever.

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