Hold That Thought


Maybe if we aim
our breaths just right,
tame the trite
and e(r)ase the mind,
the miles will
melt, the map will chime;
our words will scorch
this barren land
in spirit and spell
and sign.






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1 Response to Hold That Thought

  1. Oh, if only miles could be erased so easily. With a breath — I suppose the wind can help or hinder.
    Love the rhyming here. I like the “map will chime” – that’s a very interesting concept.

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