…
we are broken
by the visage
…..(vice age)
of our own ana
-biosis, altruism
spent on defunct
and curdled things.
the first draft
is a slight
twinge,
a partition,
a meteor burned,
a big bowl
of nothing.
scratch that:
there are innards here,
perhaps worth
hunting.
..
wordled for mindlovemiserysmenagerie.
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Wow you nailed it! This is fantasticXD
Well, this is a perfect description of writing that first draft and then knowing how and what to edit! Well done!
Fantastic! I adore that title.
This is about anorexia.