paper tigers

we are broken
by the visage
      …..(vice age)
of our own ana
-biosis, altruism
spent on defunct
and curdled things.

the first draft
is a slight
twinge,
a partition,
a meteor burned,
a big bowl
of nothing.

scratch that:
there are innards here,
perhaps worth
hunting.

..
wordled for mindlovemiserysmenagerie.

 

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3 Responses to paper tigers

  1. Wow you nailed it! This is fantasticXD

  2. Well, this is a perfect description of writing that first draft and then knowing how and what to edit! Well done!

  3. Shawna says:

    Fantastic! I adore that title.

    This is about anorexia.

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