Re: Oh Range, Sun Kissed

Posted on March 5, 2015 by whimsygizmo

Drink deep
……………………………of this bright
spill,
…………………crush
it if you will.

…

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4 Responses to Re: Oh Range, Sun Kissed

  1. Shimmer says:
    March 5, 2015 at 4:58 pm

    Love it! But I would have added a parenthetical “(on)” after “crush.” 🙂

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    • Shimmer says:
      March 5, 2015 at 5:03 pm

      Oh, and I love how you emphasized “bright” and “deep, ” because you are definitely both. I know you also feel “spilled” a lot of the time, but you know you are a beautiful mess (i.e., a totally crush-worthy spill).

      Ooh, the first and last lines together become “Drink the/dee/De-pit, if you like.” Awesome. So fruity and hard//core. Yet juicy and sunny, with oh-so-much range in your voice. And you just “re” and “re” and “re.” You’re always doing that magic thang again and again. 😉

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  2. anne katherine says:
    March 5, 2015 at 5:11 pm

    I wish we could get a sun-kissed range around here! We got about 8 inches of snow today!
    I love the message in this – we all need to crush it while we can!

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