Keiko McCartney
…
,
she is full
of storms, swarms
of wind and rain
and sea.
Show(h)er
the breeze, ask
these trees to loose
her sway.
Give her a sorrow
-song to swallow,
the banks of a river
to show her
the way.
..
prompted by mindlovemiserysmenagerie.
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So clever!!!
I love the image of a woman being twisted and squeezed dry. And she’s not just full of water; she’s full of storm.
And also: strum.
Makes me think of the game of blind man’s bluff where we were blindfolded, turned until dizzy, and then pushed in a direction to start us off to find each other …
I love that comma in the beginning. I’m not sure if we should really twist her, though 🙂