Twist Her

keiko-mccartneyKeiko McCartney


she is full
of storms, swarms
of wind and rain
and sea.

the breeze, ask
these trees to loose
her sway.

Give her a sorrow
-song to swallow,
the banks of a river
to show her
the way.
prompted by mindlovemiserysmenagerie.


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5 Responses to Twist Her

  1. Susan says:

    Makes me think of the game of blind man’s bluff where we were blindfolded, turned until dizzy, and then pushed in a direction to start us off to find each other …

  2. I love that comma in the beginning. I’m not sure if we should really twist her, though 🙂

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