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“Must I hold a candle to my shames?” – The Merchant of Venice
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These stars are Roman
candles to my scars, splitting
this sky wide open with lust
-er. My crippled hands are
crocuses, poking up through
snow, shadowed,
infinite in prayer. There’s a
flicker here, you see. Of
silver-slivered cloud, of
tumbled rain, of sleepy ebony
sky to cover my un
-quiet skin in down
blanket. Of hope. Of
healing. Of wings, even
in the face of flame,
and all this melting
wax.
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Quickly prompted.
I’m glad you have so many scars (featured in your poems of late.)
This is a great prayer poem – of giving yourself up to a higher power.
“My crippled hands are
crocuses” I love that. I think I started a poem like that once — “My hands are crocuses.”
“sleepy ebony” “sleepy bone” … Love both.
Melting wax and a blanket of hope — sounds like bliss to me.
I wrote one way back about hands as crocuses, too. I remembered it as I was writing this one, but then couldn’t find it. I bet the first time I wrote that image, I had absorbed it from you. 😉 That happens, quite a bit. You are making me a better writer. What’s the saying? “Artists borrow; geniuses steal?”
Oh my gosh, you’re way too good at this.