Hunting Stars



Ah, Orion.
How have you fastened
yourself around this vast sky?
Belted
out your starsongs,
stung us an ellip
-sis,
a triple kiss
blown for future
………….wishes?

 

 

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prompted by toads.
read more about Orion here and here.

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18 Responses to Hunting Stars

  1. Kir Piccini says:

    LOVE!

  2. Triple kiss to you for using ‘belt’ as a verb. Way to belt it out, Orion.

  3. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:

    Orion is my true love, since childhood — and I love how you play with him here.

  4. Belted
    out your starsongs….they do sing. Love this

  5. Kerry O'Connor says:

    One of my favourite constellations – I love the names of the stars that make it up – Bellatrix and Betelgeuse sit well on the tongue.
    I like the way you have phrased your poem as two questions to Orion in apostrophe.

  6. Sherry Marr says:

    This is wonderful!!! I love the belting out of the starsongs and the blowing of a kiss. Inspired!

  7. ManicDdaily says:

    Ah–lovely–really this is sweet and inspired and original–and fun! Thanks. k.

  8. ihatepoetry says:

    I love how you linked “fastened yourself” and “belt” together seamlessly. Quite wonderful.

  9. One of my favorite constellations to find and you’ve made magic of it! 🙂

  10. Cosmoscami says:

    Love the triple kiss.
    Isn’t that what we look for?

  11. I like the “ellip” “sis” – the word break there. And the triple kiss.

  12. Ella says:

    I, too love how clever you are! This is stellar~

  13. hedgewitch says:

    Orion and his belt always seem to stand out for me in the night sky–the hunter, forever chasing, is here fastened to his path–I love the connect-the-stars picture you’ve drawn here.

  14. M says:

    two months back took the sons to Joshua Tree, on a new moon night, the observatory outside 29 Palms had serious ‘amateurs’ with their big scopes, just outside the small dome. One of the targets was Orion’s belt. cool pen, and a good reminder – time to get back out to the desert, to see the stars ~

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