…
This morning
I moved
a comma
with great
effort
,
wielding that tiny
black fulcrum like a
wedge, perhaps the
lever of a pulley,
tugging up the corners
of your smile.
..
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Your poems always make me smile.
(And this reminds me of a meme I saw on Facebook that said something like, “Thanksgiving. Food comma,” and had a drawing of a comma with food inside it. LOL!)
The smile is one of the most simple machines. You move commas in the best way!
I just love your poems..they are sometimes (Many times!) the highlight of my day.
ah,
yes
Fantastic. A comma holds so much power.