(a Facebook found poem)
..
It’s always a good time
to paint
beauty in the broken,
..first field trip,
…….closing day,
pennies from heaven.
Wonder where she gets her um
…….-brellas?
Sometimes we all just have to un
……………..-learn the fear.
Yep. We get lights, but only
….if the clouds stay away.
Anyone in need of a fade?
..
NaPoWriMo, day 17.
I love poets that take risks and I like what you did with line length and line endings. Awesome job!
Only FB could take a poem and mangle it.
Oh my goodness; isn’t this wise? “Sometimes we all just have to un-learn the fear.”
“Anyone in need of a fade?” Yes, indeed.
I love “rumbrellas,” you sneaky little thing. 😉
This is really cool. How is this found? Is it like different people’s statuses? Yep, we get lights! And sometimes we all just need to “un.”
Yes, this is quotes from friend’s posts or statuses, with a piece of a comment or two thrown in. I was so happy to read “Anyone in need of a fade?” on a friend’s status. She is studying to become a barber. 😉
That is a great line!