Hits you right in the feels.

(a Facebook found poem)

..

It’s always a good time
to paint
beauty in the broken,
..first field trip,
…….closing day,
pennies from heaven.

Wonder where she gets her um
…….-brellas?

Sometimes we all just have to un
……………..-learn the fear.

Yep. We get lights, but only
….if the clouds stay away.

Anyone in need of a fade?

 

..
NaPoWriMo, day 17.

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6 Responses to Hits you right in the feels.

  1. I love poets that take risks and I like what you did with line length and line endings. Awesome job!

  2. gh0stpupp3t says:

    Only FB could take a poem and mangle it.

  3. wiggle and melancholy says:

    Oh my goodness; isn’t this wise? “Sometimes we all just have to un-learn the fear.”

    “Anyone in need of a fade?” Yes, indeed.

    I love “rumbrellas,” you sneaky little thing. 😉

  4. This is really cool. How is this found? Is it like different people’s statuses? Yep, we get lights! And sometimes we all just need to “un.”

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