What was Lost

Screenshot 2015-04-24 11.14.50

With Margo at PoMoSco, day 24.
Process: I removed adjectives, and prepositions.

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5 Responses to What was Lost

  1. margo roby says:

    How cool is this! I love the result.

  2. margo roby says:

    Why are there squiggly green lines?

    • whimsygizmo says:

      Ha! Because it’s a screen shot. I couldn’t get it to cut and paste with the white words – would have had to start all over again in WordPress. Consider them frosting. šŸ˜‰

      • Jean says:

        e.e. would be very pleased with the frosting

        My eye turns the opening into “I saw a come-running (noun).” Then there’s, “the leaves, selves.” Or maybe “the leaves’ selves.”

        “writing — the life-dross of death”
        “writing the life-dross of death”

        “I was myself. I broke.” Either this is a sequence of steps (or cause and effect), or it means, “I broke myself.”

        The end says “breathing a Mayan.”

  3. This is very powerful!

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