Let’s Make Waves

.
and a hundred other things
worth more than money:
love, a wish,
amends, be
……………….-lieve.

Let’s break some laws –
gravity and others,
……..averages
and Murphy and
his friends.

Let’s throw something
besides these tired stones;
a party, maybe
or caution
…….to the wind.

Let’s swirl-toe in some in
-digo –
light
sound
heat
and
…….sea,

and see
what spill of cresc-end
-oh! we’re supposed to be.

 

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Prompted by Poets United.

 

 

 

 

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22 Responses to Let’s Make Waves

  1. Claire says:

    Where have you been all my blogging life? Loving how you throw down words 🙂 what a cresc-end-oh!

  2. Sanaa says:

    I like the flowing energy and rhythm in this poem 😀

  3. ihatepoetry says:

    Oh, yes, Let’s! Love love love this.

  4. Susan says:

    Oh! I can only wish! In relationships, in schools, in street movements, in hearts and minds. Maybe walls can still fall and spirits rise! (Thanks for your comment on my poem.)

  5. Some cool wordplay here – loved it, kiddo!

  6. Loved the devil-may-care attitude, as much as the crazy word mixing..Very lively with a fresh perspective..
    Eileen

  7. and see
    what spill of cresc-end
    -oh! we’re supposed to be….. that is too good.

  8. Candy says:

    Oh yes! swirl-toe! I would love to see how your mind works. This is super

  9. What a fun one! But I’d say there’s millions, not hundreds, of things worth more than money (though they are not things at all 🙂 I love the wavy shape of this!

  10. thotpurge says:

    Enjoyed this one- “swirl toe in indigo”..Fun!!

  11. Mary says:

    Oh, indeed let’s throw a party to the wind, and making a wish instead of waves sounds like a better choice. Smiles.

  12. drnurit says:

    Another absolute favorite, De!

  13. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:

    Ha! Indeed let’s. Thank you for the joy 🙂

  14. Sumana Roy says:

    oh yes lets make waves and see “what spill of cresc-end / -oh! we’re supposed to be.”…fun and a Brilliant write! love the energy and freshness in this…

  15. humbird says:

    I love this creative revolutionary approach to waves…moving piece!

  16. Myrna says:

    This poem made me want to skip and dance. Yes let’s have a wave of revolutions! Love your words and love this poem.

  17. X says:

    Let’s break some laws – ha, that was rather the ramp up point in this for me. Love what you did with in-digo light as well. Nice crescend-OH as well. There is a heat there.

  18. Jae Rose says:

    We are clapping our hands with glee – we must make waves and not be stuck within confines of any kind…good to see you too!

  19. glmeisner says:

    Great poem, wonderful use of word structure.

  20. jammy7000 says:

    Lovely! The sheer playfulness of this poem quite charmed me, De. I had to go back and read it again!

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