.
Shake the sky.
She’ll
curl low; trace
………maps, traps,
wings,
…..and other all
-important unfoldings.
.
Written for magpie tales.
.
Shake the sky.
She’ll
curl low; trace
………maps, traps,
wings,
…..and other all
-important unfoldings.
.
Written for magpie tales.
Wow. This is lovely. I really love short poetry that packs a punch, where every word has heft, just like this. Good write.
Simply beautiful!!!
Intriguing…
So lovely and delicate
love!
I like that phrase “important unfoldings” – which to me means all those things that happen in life that we would not in a million years have predicted but which unfold all the same and wind up be all-important in our life.
I can never look at the Sky the same way again
I love the simplicity of this, De.
“Shake the sky. She’ll curl low” She will, won’t she?
intriguing indeed!
Anna :o]
I really like this, especially the last line.
I never knew
Love the notion of shaking the sky…
Now that’s my kind of unfolding.