Anything but Still, Life

Still Life with a Hat, an Umbrella, and a Bag. John Frederick PetoStill Life, 1907 by John Frederick Peto 

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I am nothing
….if not well
-hung and ready for anything.
Rain, shine, a magic carpet
bag of tricks dang
-led to help me
trompse the earth. Shall I go forth bare
-foot, or find my clunkiest shoes? Help
me choose, Love. I’m hooked on you,
………………………………….and waiting.

 

 

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written for the mag.

 

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12 Responses to Anything but Still, Life

  1. Elena says:

    Nice couple of jokes in there…well-hung. ;-p Fun write.

  2. berri myst says:

    I love these:
    “Shall I go forth bare-foot, or find my clunkiest shoes?”
    “I’m hooked on you, and waiting.”

    Fantastic title!

  3. Ah.. love that line of being hooked.. lots of very clever hyphens too..

  4. LOL – I was hooked as well 😉

  5. Kathe W. says:

    love the word “trompse”…. excellent take and love the play on words!

  6. What a great job with the image! You’ve created a very romantic poem!

  7. Candy says:

    and I am hooked on you 🙂
    Clunky shoes – perfect!

  8. Inventive and skillful; well done.

  9. Kir Piccini says:

    Brilliant..and wonderful.

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