three-fourths water, one part salt


………….first, the rain:
drizzled down like sea
fallen from
this gray sky.
then the notion that it’s all
just spilling to earth.

..prompted by B&P‘s Shadorma & Beyond at mindlovemisery


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4 Responses to three-fourths water, one part salt

  1. berri myst says:

    So beautiful.

    I love the way you parted the saltwater in the first line, Moses. I also see some Noah in there. Basically, you’re thinking about God while you’re crying. It feels like your sadness is the center of the universe, but it also feels like you’re nothing. At least maybe your tears returning to the earth will make something grow.

    Ooh, I just saw Saul too. “’s all”

  2. DELL CLOVER says:

    LOVE this–perfection!

  3. Jen says:

    Beautifully mysterious —

  4. Yes, we are just pawns here – the rain is for the earth and we are just a small part of the earth.

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