.
Whew.
Got me plenty of sweaty glee
and a bum knee
and the 1-2-3 of my own heart
-beat.
True or false: my current pulse
rate is pounding to the surface,
my co
-ordinates are un-
and my
energy’s de
-pleted.
But that five-minute kiss
of spastic music bliss
was
just
what I
needed.
.
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True and just what I needed! Lovely!
yes…sometimes we just need to MOVE!
awesome write for this prompt. totally enjoyed.
Ah.. the beat beat beat my heart… that release..
It’s gotta be in our evolutionary wiring, something we keep from our shark side of the family — gotta move, gotta shake, else we die. You nailed it.
damn fine poem!
Pure delight!
This was wonderful 😀 really felt the pulsing beat throughout this piece 😀
True or false: my current pulse
rate is pounding to the surface,
Beautifully executed 😀
Time to hit the floor my friend.
BOOGIE ! 😉
Wonderful and inspiring too.. Dancing is a really great form of kinetic energy.
Awesome.
just
what I
needed….. yep, sometimes, your feet respond whether you want to or not!
Oh I love this. Enjoyed the wordplay – perfectly penned!
Five minute kiss of spastic music bliss!!! LOVE!!!
Oh gosh, this is a poem I too could have written (though perhaps not in such inspired words) after attempting to dance with the old gusto. 😀
🙂 what a great description of dancing!
De, fantastic work here! I especially admire your line enjambments and how they convened a sort of loosed breath and frenetic-ness. Thanks for posting to the out standard and Viva la!!!
Sometimes even if it depletes us, it’s still something glorious that we needed 😉
Nice!
Woohoooo!!!! Yes it was. That was fantastic!