What will I become? Midnight. (When you leave me again.)

Posted on May 29, 2015 by whimsygizmo

Screenshot 2015-05-29 09.21.35

 

pink girl offers first lines as story/poem starters (my title is one, tilted.)
click here to read them all, and get inspired.

 

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6 Responses to What will I become? Midnight. (When you leave me again.)

  1. Kir Piccini says:
    May 29, 2015 at 9:33 am

    The plight of Cinderella.
    (I’ve been watching a lot of Into The Woods since Jacob loves it “the most” right now)

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  2. whimsygizmo says:
    May 29, 2015 at 9:35 am

    I haven’t seen it yet. I have to be in the mood for all that singing. 😉

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  3. Miss Stacy says:
    May 29, 2015 at 10:36 am

    oh, i love it.

    so much emotional packed into such a small space.

    midnight, candlelight illuminating the scars that’s left…that’s the image your poem gave to me.

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  4. mia says:
    May 29, 2015 at 11:11 am

    I absolutely love that the answer to the question “What will I become?” is “Midnight.” Obviously. You people jack me around enough, I’ll be all pitch-black up in yo face. 😛 Forget about stars, folks. She’s got enough scars to black it ALL out. Black and white always makes me think of photography and words.

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  5. anne katherine says:
    May 29, 2015 at 7:16 pm

    This is a sad one, but in a good way! “falling scars” yikes.

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  6. julespaige says:
    May 30, 2015 at 1:10 pm

    Cool.
    I borrowed a bit of your delightful form-(sum)ation for Sasha Wikems:
    https://juleslongerstrandsofgems.wordpress.com/2015/05/29/elements-a-wikems-5-29-s/

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