Shadow Girl

Posted on June 6, 2015 by whimsygizmo

(a shadorma)

..
She is a
stranger in her own
skin, an un
-quiet storm
strangled by the breath of dawn.
Her pulse is spilled moon.
 

 

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I’m feeling a little ethereal today.
Prompted by A Prompt Each Day.

 

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12 Responses to Shadow Girl

  1. loricarlson66 says:
    June 6, 2015 at 2:23 pm

    Wow! That is amazing! I love the way you broke the lines and that last image just blew me away!

    Reply
  2. Candy says:
    June 6, 2015 at 3:55 pm

    Love, love that last line!

    Reply
  3. anne katherine says:
    June 6, 2015 at 6:32 pm

    Well, this could be about Caitlin, but dare I bring that up? It kind of fits! I, too, love the last line.

    Reply
  4. Zane says:
    June 6, 2015 at 7:49 pm

    Shadows Girls are the best.

    Reply
  5. Ramesh sood says:
    June 6, 2015 at 10:27 pm

    So very beautifully crafted….. Her pulse is spilled mood… What a fantastic image..
    Happy to be here.. Will add to my happiness if you too visit me and leave a comment: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2015/06/light-and-darkness.html

    Reply
  7. Vinay Leo R. says:
    June 7, 2015 at 9:07 am

    Yeah. sometimes, one does feel like a stranger even in one’s skin.

    Reply
  8. kalpana solsi says:
    June 7, 2015 at 10:02 am

    Its very strange to feel like a stranger in one’s own skin. Beautifully and convincingly written

    Reply
  9. C.C. says:
    June 7, 2015 at 10:18 am

    This is definitely ethereal…..extremely gorgeous.

    Reply
  10. Gillena Cox says:
    June 7, 2015 at 2:29 pm

    nice one

    thanks for dropping in to read mine

    much love…

    Reply

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  12. purplepeninportland says:
    June 13, 2015 at 8:58 pm

    ‘Her pulse is spilled moon.’ I read that line several times. I find it stunning, De.

    Reply

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