the milky way meanders just right
from behind us
forever to beyond
all this deep dark
blue.
stars spill themselves
in stories.
i
am
listening.
..
the milky way meanders just right
from behind us
forever to beyond
all this deep dark
blue.
stars spill themselves
in stories.
i
am
listening.
..
I wanted you to add “too” at the end, to squeeze out a rhyme. Or just for funsies, you could say “two,” in case you’re feeling split at all. 🙂
I do hope you’re going to write for today’s dverse prompt. It’s our Edie Brickell song!!!
The best thing to do is listen! “stars spill themselves in stories” — very nice.
Me too! 🙂
Oh yes!