Never Seen the Sky

Have you?

This place and I
are unfamiliar friends.

This grace and I
are wrestling to the end.

My heart’s un
-done, tumbled by these
gathered storms,
colliding stars.

What may
I say
to make you want
………….to stay?

Inspired (per Shawna’s request) by this

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8 Responses to Never Seen the Sky

  1. Kir Piccini says:

    This just spoke to me, in feelings not words.

  2. Jennifer G. Knoblock says:

    “This grace and I
    are wrestling to the end.”
    Oh, yes.

  3. the last ember eye says:

    “my heart sun, done” … Sounds way too familiar.

    The way you altered the meaning in the closing is really clever … like there’s a seduction in it, to try to make him stay with you. I also like “never-seen” as a verb in the title. It sounds like you’re saying you haven’t seen it. But I think you’ve actually never-seen it, which is something magical.

  4. “wrestling to the end” – I feel the push-pull of this one.

  5. wrestling to the end.. I wonder if words are enough. Amazing write

  6. Grace says:

    My heart’s un-done ~ Love the opening lines De ~

  7. drnurit says:

    Staying — just for the pleasure of reading your beautiful words…

  8. Marie Elena says:

    Oh De … I’ve not visited for a while. Too long. Thank you for your words. Wow …

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