…
Have you?
This place and I
are unfamiliar friends.
This grace and I
are wrestling to the end.
My heart’s un
-done, tumbled by these
gathered storms,
colliding stars.
Come.
What may
I say
to make you want
………….to stay?
..
Inspired (per Shawna’s request) by this.
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This just spoke to me, in feelings not words.
“This grace and I
are wrestling to the end.”
Oh, yes.
“my heart sun, done” … Sounds way too familiar.
The way you altered the meaning in the closing is really clever … like there’s a seduction in it, to try to make him stay with you. I also like “never-seen” as a verb in the title. It sounds like you’re saying you haven’t seen it. But I think you’ve actually never-seen it, which is something magical.
“wrestling to the end” – I feel the push-pull of this one.
wrestling to the end.. I wonder if words are enough. Amazing write
My heart’s un-done ~ Love the opening lines De ~
Staying — just for the pleasure of reading your beautiful words…
Oh De … I’ve not visited for a while. Too long. Thank you for your words. Wow …