tornado maybe


this day’s gone
cloudy with a chance
of some cycloned gray,
a stray heart wanting,
a swirl to keep all fears
at bay. a say,
when all the
rest begs



title phrase coined by my Shawna-girl. it’s the name of her new blog.
she’ll be writin’ something there soon.

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5 Responses to tornado maybe

  1. Kir Piccini says:

    “sigh-lence” couldn’t be more perfect.

  2. I love the title! And yes, I hope all fears are kept at bay!

  3. Shawna says:

    “at bay, a say” … Isn’t that always the way? We don’t really have a say in anything once we’re grown-ups, do we? 🙂

    So what if we do this … “a stray heart-wanting”

    I love sticking in hyphens, all willy-nilly and unpredictable-like. 😉

  4. ihatepoetry says:

    Nice. “A stray heart wanting” that’s great imagery.

  5. Oh the sigh-lence… how day should end…

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