one breath later


..
in the languid wink
of a butterfly’s flutter by,
……….a sneeze of breeze,
i de
(sighed)
these muttering trees
might have some wisdom
i can keep.

 

..
Written for Poetic Asides

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5 Responses to one breath later

  1. Kir Piccini says:

    I just smiled. Such beautiful prose.

  2. Shawna says:

    “sigh poems” … What a perfect label.

    Such a gorgeous poem. I was expecting “brink” to pop up in there somewhere.

    And now I want an ice-skating rink poem.

  3. Oh, those muttering trees and sneeze of a breeze! Hope they were well behaved for you today 🙂 Beautiful poem

  4. They do contain a lot of wisdom indeed. Let’s hear it for all those de-sighs!

  5. I wonder.. maybe we should ask the trees.

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