objects in motion

Posted on October 23, 2015 by whimsygizmo

 


..
the world pulls. fools
us into for
-ward moment
-um, downward sway.

one weighty question, love:

would it be so wrong
for me
to ask
you to
……………stay?

 

..
Prompted by Poets United. 

 

 

 

 

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7 Responses to objects in motion

  1. Buddah Moskowitz says:
    October 23, 2015 at 10:33 am

    Tentative and beautiful. Very sweet read.

    Reply
  2. Mary says:
    October 23, 2015 at 11:34 am

    Oh, this is wonderful. You really have worked in the two different kinds of gravity so well! The last stanza is, by the way, so very touching!

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  3. Shawna says:
    October 23, 2015 at 12:33 pm

    So mathy-licious. And yes, the world does pool fools. I’m one of them.

    Reply
  4. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:
    October 23, 2015 at 2:04 pm

    Oh, such a delectable place you took this to.

    Reply
  5. Hannah Gosselin says:
    October 23, 2015 at 3:33 pm

    Oh, just to stay and stop this always forward…love your brilliant breaks, my friend. 🙂

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  6. anne katherine says:
    October 23, 2015 at 6:11 pm

    This is great. I, too, love the gravity theme here!

    Reply
  7. Susan says:
    October 23, 2015 at 8:14 pm

    Longing to be asked, I’m sure. Haha! I love how you got the weight in there! (We Quakers are such weighty people. Ahem, cough.) You ACED this Motif! Thank you.

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