objects in motion



the world pulls. fools
us into for
-ward moment
-um, downward sway.

one weighty question, love:

would it be so wrong
for me
to ask
you to


Prompted by Poets United





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7 Responses to objects in motion

  1. Tentative and beautiful. Very sweet read.

  2. Mary says:

    Oh, this is wonderful. You really have worked in the two different kinds of gravity so well! The last stanza is, by the way, so very touching!

  3. Shawna says:

    So mathy-licious. And yes, the world does pool fools. I’m one of them.

  4. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:

    Oh, such a delectable place you took this to.

  5. Oh, just to stay and stop this always forward…love your brilliant breaks, my friend. 🙂

  6. This is great. I, too, love the gravity theme here!

  7. Susan says:

    Longing to be asked, I’m sure. Haha! I love how you got the weight in there! (We Quakers are such weighty people. Ahem, cough.) You ACED this Motif! Thank you.

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