WhimSea

..

Tumble her to shore, sea
-glass shrugged from sand.

Crack open the sun
-rise, bid her to stand

on the edge of the earth,
see His face,
feel her worth.

 

..
prompted by OctPoWriMo, day 27

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5 Responses to WhimSea

  1. As usual, your calls to nature are wonderful. I love “sea-glass shrugged.” A great message.

  2. Susan says:

    This satisfies my spirit.

  3. Sherry Marr says:

    Glorious, kiddo. I will be standing on my beloved shore this weekend and I CANT WAIT!!!!!!!

  4. Misky says:

    Oh, crack open the sunrise. Yes, I like that. >

  5. paper sea says:

    The opening seems to have a Jersey Shore reference hidden in it. 😉

    “See glass shrugged from sand.” I love that.

    And this: “Rise. Bid her to stand.” Like one person’s standing will help the other get back up as well.

    The last two lines are so powerful.

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