WhimSea

Posted on October 27, 2015 by whimsygizmo

..

Tumble her to shore, sea
-glass shrugged from sand.

Crack open the sun
-rise, bid her to stand

on the edge of the earth,
see His face,
feel her worth.

 

..
prompted by OctPoWriMo, day 27. 

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5 Responses to WhimSea

  1. anne katherine says:
    October 27, 2015 at 3:57 pm

    As usual, your calls to nature are wonderful. I love “sea-glass shrugged.” A great message.

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  2. Susan says:
    October 27, 2015 at 4:11 pm

    This satisfies my spirit.

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  3. Sherry Marr says:
    October 27, 2015 at 7:56 pm

    Glorious, kiddo. I will be standing on my beloved shore this weekend and I CANT WAIT!!!!!!!

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  4. Misky says:
    October 28, 2015 at 4:09 am

    Oh, crack open the sunrise. Yes, I like that. >

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  5. paper sea says:
    October 28, 2015 at 10:14 am

    The opening seems to have a Jersey Shore reference hidden in it. 😉

    “See glass shrugged from sand.” I love that.

    And this: “Rise. Bid her to stand.” Like one person’s standing will help the other get back up as well.

    The last two lines are so powerful.

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