Oh shun

Posted on October 30, 2015 by whimsygizmo

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cobalt blue
silken wave spray
briny echo slap,

……………………..thank you for my salt.
 

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Prompted by OctPoWriMo, day 29. 

 

 

 

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5 Responses to Oh shun

  1. Susan says:
    October 31, 2015 at 4:48 am

    Oh shun and oh sun give SOOO much!

    Reply
  2. ash says:
    October 31, 2015 at 6:55 am

    The way you morphed “ocean” first made me see “oh, S, hun” … Like you’re about to give me a hug and a little talking-to. 😉

    Also the Huns.

    “briny echo slap” … Man, I love that line. This poem is AWESOME!!!

    Reply
  3. ihatepoetry says:
    October 31, 2015 at 12:56 pm

    Great play on words, as always.

    Reply
  4. anne katherine says:
    October 31, 2015 at 6:06 pm

    Attitude of gratitude! That’s what we all need!

    Reply

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