Oh shun

cobalt blue
silken wave spray
briny echo slap,

……………………..thank you for my salt.

Prompted by OctPoWriMo, day 29




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5 Responses to Oh shun

  1. Susan says:

    Oh shun and oh sun give SOOO much!

  2. ash says:

    The way you morphed “ocean” first made me see “oh, S, hun” … Like you’re about to give me a hug and a little talking-to. 😉

    Also the Huns.

    “briny echo slap” … Man, I love that line. This poem is AWESOME!!!

  3. ihatepoetry says:

    Great play on words, as always.

  4. Attitude of gratitude! That’s what we all need!

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