haiku for dVerse

Posted on November 17, 2015 by

 

frozen gray sky weeps,

waiting still for indigo

to unzip the clouds.

 

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Be sure to head over to dVerse and see what Toni has to say about haiku. Very insightful, especially for those of us who struggle with it.

 

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6 Responses to haiku for dVerse

  2. Grace says:
    November 17, 2015 at 2:12 pm

    Just a timely and lovely haiku ~

    Reply
  3. Victoria C. Slotto says:
    November 17, 2015 at 2:14 pm

    Lovely haiku. You really give a sense of impending winter weather, and the mood it creates.

    Reply
  4. Shawna says:
    November 18, 2015 at 6:44 am

    This is exceptional haiku. And I don’t think it’s about weather at all.

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  6. kanzensakura says:
    November 20, 2015 at 9:21 am

    I love how the sky waits for indigo. Perfect haiku in every sense of the word. It of course says much in the lovely subtle way haiku has. I’m feeling that way myself today, even though the sky is bright and blue.

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