word crunk



let’s get loose and funky,
let’s lose ourselves to this
furious sky. let’s turn and
kern, get drunk on phrase
and play with poems for
days and days until we
collapse in a hilarious high.
let’s dance ourselves sane,
feed our lungs moon’s lullaby.

 

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Written for a fun new challenge over at dVerse, the Quadrille.
Exactly 44 words, using a given word. Come dance with us! 

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16 Responses to word crunk

  1. Grace says:

    Love the energetic dancing verses De ~ My favorite line:
    feed our lungs moon’s lullaby.

  2. Mary says:

    Ah, I like the idea of dancing ourselves sane! I am going a bit ‘stir crazy’ with our below zero weather here, so I could use a bit of this movement, I think!

  3. Waltermarks says:

    “Dance ourselves sane,” never tried that one, probably need to. i’m sure i’ll be encouraged to try with this insporation

  4. Bodhirose says:

    Love this, De! Funky and fun.

  5. C.C. says:

    “drunk on phrase” and “a hilarious high”—now that’s the kind of intoxication I could totally get on board with 🙂 Really enjoyed this!

  6. I this is why I read and write poetry.. Dance myself sane.. And the lunatic moon becomes a lullaby..

  7. Sanity danCinG relative
    ways of human bliss..
    oh.. sitting sTill WitH
    poeTry can please
    most sureLy now
    iN SonG of style..
    but the dancing flesh
    and blood.. spiRaLinG
    energy from head to toe
    has no earthly mortal
    equal
    iN
    screens oF
    flesh and blood..:)

  8. Glenn Buttkus says:

    My God, yes, a wonderful foray, terrific wordsmithing; & the voice is clarion, the metaphor intriguing; lovely leading to smiles, hip hip, right on–a poet’s ballad, nearly an anthem. I like the lines /let’s lose ourselves to this furious sky/.

  9. lynn__ says:

    You’re playing my song 🙂

  10. lillian says:

    Ah De….loving this one! I’ll get loose and funky with you any day, in this wonderful world of dVerse! A very fun one for me.

  11. Tara R. says:

    These words feel like a spoken dance.

  12. kanzensakura says:

    What fun! Let’s dance ourselves sane….great. De, you are contagious! I just posted #2.

  13. Sounds like a resort for poets! Would love to check in.
    Love it. 🙂

  14. sreeja says:

    vibrant….wonderful!

  15. Bryan Ens says:

    “Dance ourselves sane. ” Such a brilliant line!

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