what goes

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Written for Prompt Nights over at A Dash of Sunny. 

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11 Responses to what goes

  1. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    Whistles!! This is awesome De 😀 especially love “Fate’s got a way of lurking around, smirking its in-significant smile 😉 Thank you so much for participating ❤

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

  2. Very clever. The poem zigs and zags taking the reader through amusements and delights and satisfies very well at the end. The adage(s) set up the poem yet the result is fresh and imaginative. Well done!

  3. Love obviously can make itself be contended with at breakneck speed. One has to be careful!. Nicely De!

    Hank

  4. Love can obviously make itself be contended with at breakneck speed. One has to be careful!. Nicely De!

    Hank

  5. Sumana Roy says:

    wow…wow…love the breaks…Sanaa has already picked up my favorite lines…

  6. Misky says:

    This made me smile. Thanks for that, De. xx >

  7. Dang, this is so very clever, De. You took Karma to a whole new level. Now maybe I can write to the prompt.

  8. Jae Rose says:

    It is wise to remember the most important things which come around – although fleeting at least we can look forward to them happening again 🙂

  9. drnurit says:

    Love traveling with you – up, down and around…

  10. She works well with words… as always!

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