..
This poem is a brandied
belch, the un
quiet squelching
of song. It’s got a long
long way to go before
it can plow through all this
endless (s)now. It needs a
drink, a think
-in(k) cap, a quiet tap
on the shoulder from a
waiting noose,
a slap in the face from an
indelicate muse. It’s refuse
-ing to con
-form a single coherent
thought, caught in a web
of its own li(n)es.
It’s pining for trees
and breeze and indigo
sway, a moon to
swoon to, a slice of sky.
It’s stuffed
to the gills with un
-answered why, and no
where
……..(for).
Hand me that bag, there.
I’m ’bout to
turn it
into something breath
-less, bleeding.
and if it won’t fit in the
trash,
let’s burn it
……….(before reading.)
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Took the weekend off to give my 3D world some TLC, including getting rid of some stuff. 😉
Catching up with Quickly, slowly.
I took some time off to go to a wedding.
…Still filling up another old suitcase to boot out.
3D world – I like that. Yet I think we can imagine quite nicely the inklings of our friends 😉
As for being ‘very trying’ I am…especially to those who believe behavior should conform to at least what they tell you, even if they themselves do not! 🙂
“It needs a” = “It needs say”
Brilliant:
“drink, a think
-in(k) cap, a quiet tap”
“I’m about two” … Love it. 🙂
I love this:
“I’m ’bout to
turn it
into something breath
-less, bleeding.”
Me too.
[Also, “getting rid of stuff” is the BEST feeling.]
Ooooo…. caught in a web of it’s own li(n)es
Another goodies from you.
Oh man…I just LOVE the way you play!! This: “a slap in the face from an
indelicate muse.” and the mention of “gills” I love those, too. Awesome, de!! 🙂